Tuesday, May 11, 2010

ten min wrightimng

Ten min wringing challenge 12 /05/2010
Omg I just ground my dog and what am I going to tell the wife will it should go like this and when I did the waching for the first time in my life the dog wonted to go and get in the wacuthing michen but then when I pushed him away I thort that he had gone but then he was not maby that is a good story or is it yes it is now lits go tell wife hay hunny I just killed the dog you did what I have to go now and he ran of down the road and then was a big caese down the road but then down the street was a nother god and he killed that one to and so there was two people caseing after him but then he said this is a noth we need to stop this but they did not wont to stop and now there was a glass window and he was not looking and he run into it bang so now he had to pay for to dogs and a window. Words 193

Wednesday, May 5, 2010

pill vors pill

Three minutes writing change
The pills are dancing and they are dancing because they like to dance why are they dancing because is they are about to be eaten but the big tablet is not so he is sad so the little pills said let’s dance but he is still sad so they left it allow
Words 56

Monday, May 3, 2010

rould

There some gold in there and he is trying to get it out but he did not bring some to tools and then he has to back to his house and to find that hi mum is there and she said what are you doing I am going to be rich so he get his tools it take hem ten minutes to get there but when he gets back he finds that is it gone

So the next day he looks for his gold it was at his mate place he had felled him there then took it when he went so they had a roil show down they had fight all day to see how could win but then one person said we could slit it but he did not want that.

The next day he went back to the hole to fine that roil was there and so was the gold he said my mum said I have to give to you so her it is and so then I went home with my gold and said ti my mum we are rich

Words 186
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Thursday, April 22, 2010

Tuesday, April 20, 2010